In this short story, the writer has gone into real detail to get all the facts and this use of knowledge made the story more enjoyable because I was able to relate to it. The scene is at Wellington College where I go to school. My most enjoyable bits was when he left it on a cliff hanger of the chapters creating me wanting to read on like in the second last chapter a mother who was not there, says ‘You took your time’, which I though was really powerful and kept reading on. The story is nicely put together and constructed well. And the ending, which he does throughout the story, a clam ending which again leaves the story on a edge
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On the first day of college, Mr Hendrick addressed the students:
“The female dormitory is out-of-bounds for all male students, and the male dormitory to the female students. Anybody caught breaking this rule will be fined $20 the first time. The second time you will be fined $60. A third time will cost you a fine of $180. Are there any questions?”
Jack Sellors inquired, “How much for a season pass?”
I have learnt a lot of things in English, but the most important thing I have learnt is to be original in my work and thing for myself.
Slide 1 (is it right?)
Is it right that in 2013, we still see referees being abused by fans, having to put up with players that just can’t move on, and managers who complain at “wrong” decision. Is it right that in 2013 referees are afraid of managers? Of course not. How many times must we listen to referees getting abuse on tv. How many football matches do you see the referee not get abuse? Not many. Why do managers get to have interviews to express their thoughts and not the referee, is that the society that we live in. Are you afraid of the people you work with?I ask Why?
Slide 2 ( what do coaches think?)
I had an exclusive interview with a man called Vincent Walton, who has coached 6 senior and Junior teams, and I got his thoughts on the situation. He thought that there has been good progression with the Chartered Standard in Junior league, but he thought nothing is ever going to get better if the parents don’t stop shouting abuse on the touch-line, and youngsters watch their role-models misbehaving, so they think why can’t I do it.
Slide 3 (my experiences)
I think parents shouting on the touch-line is just support for their child and its not meant to be mean to the refs. When I play for my club, lots of my teammates complain to the refs, and I hate to do say I give some backchat, out of frustration. If i could see myself I probably would stop, but I don’t like to lose.
Slide 4 (polls)
All the polls show that refs should not be abused, which shows that people do care about the referees, but still quite a few wouldn’t care less. These polls are an indication that we can move forward,but its just who wants to step up.
Is it right that in 2013 referees are afraid of managers? Of course not. How many times must we listen to referees getting abuse on tv. How many football matches do you see the referee not get abuse? Not many. Why do managers get to have interviews to express their thoughts and not the referee, is that the society that we live in. Are you afraid of the people you work with? Why? How many times do we hear of referees in the news, in any sport for making a wrong decision? Do they do it on purpose? Of course not. Are managers opinions perfect and referees not? What do you think? What do we have to do? Ban Managers from the touch-line? If that’s what we have to do, why not?
Do you not think that we should hear the referee’s point of view? Or do you not just care? They are human beings you know. It’s not easy when you have 70,000 people at Old Trafford looking at you to make a decision when you have only seen a glimpse. I would like to see you in that position.
Third Form Research Log
| Date Indicate if lesson or prep |
Source of Information Website name/ Book title etc. |
Brief Evaluation of Value Score out of 5 plus comments – use class notes to help evaluation. | Action Taken E.g. notes made, phone call made, interview arranged. |
| 18.01 Period 3 | http://www.dh.gov.uk | 5/5 Government Website, authoritative source, academics referenced. | Notes made. |
| 18.45 Prep |
www.twtd.co.uk | ⅗ Ipswich town website, unauthoritative.(people dont think) | Poll made on website Do you think referees should be interview to show what they think? Yes = 53.3% No = 46.7% |
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18. 54 Prep |
club@cardiffcityfc.co.uk info@wastc.co.uk FanZone@skysports.com |
0/5 No-one has replied back |
Emailed them ( club websites) |
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20.10 Prep |
Interview with a football coach who has coached 6 senior and youth teams | ⅘ Vince Walton, Good source, Spoke to him about him. |
Notes made, Go to learn more about the youth game and how abusing referees is not good especially in the youth game. |
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18.11 Prep |
http://www.easypolls.net/ | ⅖, not many people care about football on that site. |
Poll made. Do you think refs should get verbally abused by players and managers? Yes = 63% No = 37% |
| 18.21 | http://www.usatoday.com/story/sports/soccer/europe/2012/11/27/chelsea-mark-clattenburg-racism-accusation/1730731/ | ⅗ Website about chelsea feeling bad for accusing Mark Clanttenburg |
Notes made Shows that big clubs are too hasty, but willing to say they were wrong. |
| 12.30 | My experience of playing for my club | ⅗ Myself, but I’m only young so I don’t know how it effects refs. |
Made Notes. Refs getting abuse from parents is only support for their child. |
Imagery in Macbeth
Firstly, he uses the images of a step which he has fallen down a step when Malcolm becomes the prince and this elucidates the fact that Macbeth quickly sees his ambitions to liquidate the King.
For example “Stars, hide your fires;” this creates a vivid sense of his desires and intentions for himself.He wants the blanket of darkness to hide the fire of malice inside of him
In addition, the phrase which you eyes fear creates a startling portrayal of the King by Macbeth, and accentuate the feeling of pain for Macbeth as he knows what he is doing is wrong.
Analytical phrases
- These scences establishes the plays dramatic premise
- The captain dwells specially on images of carnage
- The stage directions indicate
- establish a dark mood
- The poet’s intense description leaves an imprint
- This skilful combination of intellectual content
- The poetic theory that underlies
- Masterfully expresses concepts through the use of symbols and imagery.
- They emphasized human emotions
- On a superficial level
- to encompass the new realities
- perceived in the world about them.
- cut off from all human companionship.
- They emphasized human emotions
- But the explanatory notes complicate
- its thematic ambiguity
- by implying that the verse itself
- an element of humor
- much of which is certainly intended by the poem
- bit of parody aimed at the writers of serious glosses
- other aspects of its narratives are less easily grasped
- In the developing themes
- malignant supernatural forces immediately appear in the form of the three witches.
- dominated by a sense of the grisliness and cruelty of war
- bloody murders that fill the play are foreshadowed by the bloody victory that the Scots win over their enemies.
- obvious fixation
- displays a fundamental confusion and inactivity
- This line echoes the witches’
- establishes a connection between
- focus of the drama’s moral confusion.
- the action quickly shifts
- Overall
- On the other hand
- The “Scottish play”
- That was one of my vivid memories
- reimagined in the midst
- After their fruitful collaboration
- while admitting
- But you may also recognise
- Visual touches
- difines the sublime
- At a thrilling
- Among the contempary things that
- To the Verblization of the tragic frenzy
- The play burst
- We are thrust into the heart stopping ……
- the traumatised soldier
- The impulse to
- The characters’s journey….
- Shakespeare employs vivid imagery to create a powerful effect on the reader
- Firstly, he uses the images of fire and starts to signify…..
- For example “Stars, hide your fires;” the effect of this is to create a sense of______ and to indicate_________
- In addition to
- Shakespeare uses the technique of Soliloquyto express a sense of Interiority
Vocab
surcease-relief from
mien-standing
lore-understanding something
obeisance-honor
lattice-a structure
aesthitics-how something looks
Abstract – odd,weird
Soliloquy- a speech made by a character alone on a stage, usually Shakespeare’s play.
Employs- tell us
Interiority- the inner workings of the mind
imminent – about to happen


